Hmmm, I see. I need to put more details.

I'll put that in mind. Thanks!

Past tense

I also thought of separating it. But then decided to just put it in the first chapter

The plot is great. I enjoy reading your novel. Keep up the good work. Although improvements in conversation and more details lol. Well, that's all. Goodluck!

Shameless author here! Thank you for reading my book. I just wanna say that I'm still a noob so my novel might be not that good for your taste. Anyways, if you didn't like it I wish you can leave a review on how I can improve more. Tell me your likes, dislikes, what you hate, what you want me to improve on. I really want to write for many readers to enjoy. So I'll appreciate it if you take the time to tell your thoughts about my novel.

Thank you! I will do my best to hone my writing skills and improve!

Hehe, thank you! But I know I still need some improvements to better my work. Thank you for reading!

Interesting. A first person point of view. Quite a refreshing read and the flow is nice. I enjoyed reading it however there are only few chapters. Keep updating please lol

The plot is really interesting. I know it's really hard portraying an MC that has quite a background but you did your best and I can see it from reading the novel. The pace seems nice. Some minor adjustments on the characters conversation and traits But over all I really like the book.

First of all the plot is great. Second, sometimes I sde grammatical errors that can sometimes annoy me when reading. Third, the characters are great and unique. And lastly, I think you csn improve your work by adding details and many more

Personally I don't like cyberpunk novels. But I can see the potential here. Minimal grammatical errors and the plots seems great. However, there are only 7 chapters. Keep doing the good work though

Then I'll reread it when I have the time!

Yeah I also planned on rephrasing some parts. But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

Hmmm, personally there are too many conversations. I advise the author to just simplify their interactions. But just purely my own opinion. You can also add some expressions to make the conversation appear more lifelike and understandable

This book was lit! I really like the concept behind it. But I hope you'll put more details into it. However, that didn't mean I didn't appreciate the your writing style. I'll add this book in my library. Looking forward for updates

So far I'm liking the book. I'm quite confused at first, but it's slowly getting cleared up.I love the way you write this novel especially its sequence like the dream parts

Yeah, even I myself don't like him. But that's what sets him apart from others. His unique charisma and unique personality make you slowly love him. Although he's 'too' unique lol

Author's shower thoughts are really intriguing!