Evelena21

Love Kei, I just her to be happy 😭

Thanks for the chap! Loveddd it!

The concept is interesting, but the MC completely ruins it. He is an arrogant, muscle-brained idiot who only looks smart because the author keeps making everyone around him stupid. The Sharingan part is the clearest example. It was obviously meant to make the MC look clever, but it only worked because Itachi, Hiruzen, and Danzo were written like fools. These are veteran, high-level ninjas. A genin-level transformation technique should not be enough to fool them. If people like that can be outplayed so easily, Konoha should have collapsed ages ago. The dumbest part is how the MC instantly makes himself a fugitive for no reason. He kills someone in front of a crowd right after getting power, then acts like “why hide my strength?” That logic only works if you are already untouchable, which he clearly is not. Instead, he limits his freedom becuase of his fugitive identity, forced himself to separate from his family because of it, and creates problems that were easily avoidable. Its a matter of preference but, it also looks like the story is going down the same tired lone-wolf route. At this point, that trope is just boring and edgy, unless well executed. One thing I dont understand is, if the MC has all this knowledge and advantage, why not use it to strengthen the people close to him instead of making the same edgy, self-isolating choices for the hundredth time?

woahh, is jasmine gonna be part of the harem? Pls let it be 😭

thats crazy 😭 I hipe you can get peace brother.

I wanted to write a review and help out. I really hope this novel reaches more success, I just hope you can keep translating the novel because this is really such a gem of a fanfic. One of my top fanfic as of date.

I feel really for this. This is such a gem of a fanfic and I hope this reaches more people.

NTR WARNING!!! Author, intentionally makes you invested in the girl then deliberately destroy you by making it NTR. Authors enjoys doing it. Best way to not give him satisfaction is by not reading it. Glad I read the warnings first.

Compared to other translations, this one is well above the trashy ones. I loved it and I look forward for more.

I honestly gave this a chance. I have read about 150+ chapters so far, but I don't think I can continue on. This novel had really good romance and good r18 scenes. I enjoyed the romance and his relationship with Nadia and the other wives but the poor writing for the apocalypse stuff is a big negative of this novel. The writing is so confusing. I had very hard time picturing what the author was trying to portray. The author goes straights to the action without painting the picture of the setting first, like what happened during the first arc. The author failed to properly lay out the setting of the school, so when the mc was doing things related to the setting, it only ended up confusing the readers. Some scenes were like all over the place that I just can't follow what is happening anymore. Then there is also the fact that the author tends to be redundant: a character says this then another character says it again, feels like the author is only dragging things out to increase word count. Characterization is also flawed. Daria and Leila were portrayed to have this personality, only for it to become the total opposite later on. The main wife Nadia also had this flawed characterization. At the first, you would have an idea that her morals were already thrown out of the window pretty early on, but then the author decides to give her morals back at later chap to the point of even arguing with the mc. She would be the last one among his wives to question his decision and have an argument with him when all this time she supported the mc even if he was wrong or did questionable stuff. I am just a bit irritated since I like her character a lot but the author isn't giving her proper justice with the poor writing. In short the characterization is all over the place. They would have this personality at first then later on that personality changes a little. This not only happens with the wives but almost all characters including the mc. The author really needs to improve his world building and properly laying out the setting. I continued to 150+ just to see if this aspect would improve but it did not, and I cant bear with it anymore. This was good concept and the romance were really good, something the author was really good at. I enjoyed the romance aspect so much, but the action, world building, way of portrayal of the setting is ticking me off. Since this is majorly action, the negatives outweighed the positives thus my reason for not being able to continue on.