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Really unique concept, one that I've never seen before. Please don't drop this; or write a short epilogue if you do. A crappy and sudden ending is much better than no ending, in my opinion. Good luck with the story, I really like it so far.

Overall book is meh. Amazing premise, terrible execution imo. MC is only in about a third of the chapters I've read, maybe less, and a large portion of the chapters he isn't in aren't even related to what he's doing at the moment. Mc feels like a self -insert/wish-fulfillment character. Mc acts super smart and Justice League can't think of any comebacks, ever. I'm not sure if the author isn't smart enough to think of comebacks or if it just helps bash the JL more, I personally think both. Mc is just a stereotypical emo edgelord. This whole entire story is just one big wish-fulfillment with the sole premise of "strong person makes fun of Justice League, haha". The whole thing is entirely Justice League bashing. Out of all the chapters, ⅓ has Mc, and the rest are all just different ways of bashing the JL.

Really good so far. A few comments or jokes here and there, but mc doesn't have the stupid level of hornyness most seem to have. Non-stupid mc so far. Somewhat unique concept, pretty good execution so far. Either good translation or good writing compared to most stories nowadays. A few cliches here and there, but not so much that it detracts from the reading experience. Mc is definitely op, but not as ridiculously overpowered as most stories like this are; ae: he can't one-shot a level 80 legendary boss at level 2. Overall, a pretty good story so far. To author: Will there be romance? If so, single love interest or harem?

I know it's underwhelming, but speed-enhancing spells would be really good in emergencies. Depending on the exact effects, it could possibly also give you a boost in a fight.

Feel like it should be at most Legendary-----, feels like a unique skill more than a legendary one.

I know this is two years old, but I got reminded of this discussion by a like, and I don't really care. Anyways, to help you understand how I and several others mean what we're trying to tell you, here's an example. Say there are only 100 girls on the planet. 25 of them are 6s, 10 are 1s, 20 are 10s, 35 are 7s, etc. The mean would NOT be 5.5. Basically, TLDR, there aren't an equal number of ones as there are twos, twos as there are fives, etc. 5.5 is only the average if we assume there is an equal number of every rating. Personally, most girls I know would be somewhat offended if they were rated a 5, because that is typically considered by most people out there to be below average.

I very much don't like the fact that Ethereal has a capital E in this sentence, like the boss he killed. Raises some death flags if you ask me. Maybe it's foreshadowing that she's descended from an Ethereal, like how he's presumably descended from a divine?

This is, presumably, a café. Most cafés, at least out of the ones I've seen, don't serve most of those things. Also, it's just breakfast. He can always have something better for lunch or dinner.

It's your story, but personally I would show the total after he finishes a fight, and I'd show what he gets from bosses.