Zero_O
Lv1
Writing....
2021-07-06 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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การเขียน
6.1h
ของการอ่าน
167
อ่านหนังสือ
ป้าย
7โมเมนต์
38
Zero_O2yrแปะแล้วThe story got me really hooked, its really funny and interesting. MC as well as the other characters are really likable. Negatives- Grammar, and the description gets short. -------------------------------- I really feel your story has a great potential, grammar and good descriptions are something that could get better with practice. I am really looking forward for your future work. -----KEEP WRITING----
- Zero_O2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Mmm, it seems that the two of them know each other ... Could this girl be able to get Rodrigo join the group again? As a tutor, I have a duty to make sure that none of my students have a bad time in their golden years, if Caroline can to ensure that Rodrigo does not finish like me then I have to help them" -the tutor thought seriously- "Because if I don't, Rodrigo will end up like me, single, without friends or couple at 35, with a teacher's salary that is not enough to give you luxuries, I can barely pay the rent, and I'm so alone, nobody comes close to me, and none of my coworkers has invited me to eat, my mother told me that I was beautiful, why did I reject everyone in high school?, now nobody pays attention to me "-The tutor thought sadly and quickly, who is interrupted by Caroline upon seeing her with a strange face-
- Zero_O2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Well, well, it seems that the Mr. Pervert is also pervert with other women that are not Alice" -said Ana, annoying Rodrigo-
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