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  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Commented

    Another guy joins her harem?😜

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Posted

    Finally a transmigration novel where the mc feels like an actual human being! Trully a breath of fresh air. 5stars is not enough imo.

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Replied to EternalNightLotus

    Thanks for the reply,i think ill give the novel another shot. I dropped at first because i saw myself alot in your mc and seeing that even after all she went trough to give herself and her siblings a better life,she seems to get an even worse deal in her second life. I was really bummed out. So if youre telling me it gets better for her ill give it another try.

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Posted

    I like the the general idea of the the novel,but, like other reviews i read i absolutely agree on the fact that the pacing is way too slow.after over 100 chapters the mc should have gone trough a lot more stuff. I mean seriously does it really take 10 chapters for a mc to hitch a ride go to the market sell his stuff and go back home?

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Commented

    I was sure she would go for the inventory skill . Thx for the chapter.

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Posted

    The idea is original but while usually i dont really care about grammar and punctuation,the sentences structuring makes it hard to read and immerse yourself in the story. But the biggest downside for me, and thats a personal opinion, is that your first few chapters should only be about the mc, yet all 4 of the first chapters have different 1rst person povs wich is one of the things i dislike the most since i like to immerse myself in the mc and i dont have split personalities.

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Posted

    Heres my review so far. If you want to read this book hoping to read about a man who spends his life farming and once in a while has to fight, this isnt it. Whil the mc says his greatest goal is his farm ,author uses only a few lines to describe the farming process, while he uses many chapters to describe fights blow by blow, even though his passion is supposedly farming.all in all, its a good action novel. Its just not a novel about farming.

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Commented

    Wow! Just turned my favorite novel into some trashy cw teen romance garbage. I mean why stay and protect the nice girl whod give her life for you and is alone while you can go run after the one whos surronded by guards and will dump you in a heartbeat for "duty and kingdom"?

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Posted

    Great story , i like the characters and the world. One thing that i really hate though is that there are way too many side chapters and different povs.like pretty much 30% of the whole thing.once in a while its alright and at certain times neccessary but this much often kills the immersion for me.

  • Antoine_Henry
    Antoine_Henry3 years ago
    Replied to PancakesWitch

    Oh, my bad if i understood incorectly. I thought i read he exhausted himself pretty quickly while flying. Wich is why i thought a rune would allow him to not drain too much of his ressources while flying.btw i really love the book. Didnt mean to disrespect.