Yuval_Zabary

well yes technically, but he still had more points remaining even before that, so you're both kinda wrong. he had like 9 points a few chapters back

yeah, ok, you can't take that in good faith anymore, as others have said, it's probably meant to show affinity to water, but you could probably just show it by having her really like the pool or bathing, this straight weird

ok this is starting to get out of hand

listen i don't like being a hater (at least not about random books) but this review section is way too dishonest, if the story somewhat follows the direction of the free chapters, it's not worth it, the plot doesn't really make sense (even for wish fulfillment) the characters are different shades of hateable, the writing quality is decent (then again I block out bad writing easily so I don't even know about that) and it's just a nothing burger of a novel, there are other wish fulfillment that will give more mileage for less, not to mention be easier to pirate if you don't care about supporting the author

"the blood of the brotherhood is thicker than the waters of the womb" yeah the person who created that quote is punching the air rn

he read an interrogator's desire to "go to sleep"

ominous

please I'm begging you, please pick this up again. I really loved this one and it was one of my favorites, I can't take it being left like this

I'm begging you, please come back, i need this novel

so here's the thing, the story undoubtedly has good great ideas even, but it's bogged down by too many of them, shringan and quirk and breathing style and haki and system, not to mention the base power system, that's just boring, the ideas are there, though imo the author just fucks it up. which would be fine if there wasn't one major problem, the complete disrespect to the original story is just annoying, like come on man, you don't have to trash on the og charcters every couple chapters. overall this story is ok at best, a complete and utter drag to read at worst 2-3/5 depending on how much of a weeb you are