poopyscoopy123
Lv3
2021-06-28 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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68.3h
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1574
อ่านหนังสือ
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6โมเมนต์
10
poopyscoopy1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วBeside her was a small child that looked around my age. She had short white hair and black eyes.- poopyscoopy1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
- poopyscoopy1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAfter going into the front yard I saw my instructor. She had long white hair tied up into a ponytail like my dad. She had a black tattoo that looked like a lightning bolt and was smoking a cigar. When looking into her cold black eyes It felt like she was staring directly into my soul.
- poopyscoopy1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วRight next to her was a man around the same age as her. He had his white hair tied back and was smoking a cigar. His eyes seemed to be transparent.
- poopyscoopy1231yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
- poopyscoopy1232yrตอบกลับถึง Kalawang
I just changed it, look again.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - poopyscoopy1232yrตอบกลับถึง RexHarris
Ok, I'll change it to around the academy which would seem more reasonable.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - poopyscoopy1232yrตอบกลับถึง SwordGod007
Sorry. But when I said that the plot was 4 years before the original plot I thought that meant that the MC was 4 years older than naruto. And in the synopsis, I said that this naruto might have a slightly different timeline than the original. Sorry again.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - poopyscoopy1232yrตอบกลับถึง BlackKingJadeCh 1 Rebirth
- poopyscoopy1232yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
+1
A - "Yes," Shinji planned to join and get the rank of Chunin as soon as possible. He will train moderately hard during these two weeks as he plans to spend some time with his teammates to make sure they're all for the Chunin Exams.