Flamefalco
Hello, I'm Flamefalco and I am Deaf person wanting to become a writer as my hobby. Though my English isn't good, any feedback will help me a lot.
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Flamefalco2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วHere we go again.
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว- Flamefalco2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วI looked at her, betrayed. When she had picked her favorite brooch, she came and sat beside me.
- Flamefalco2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Your kitchen will be Hell's Kitchen and Hotels, a Nightmare!"
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Omg Ladybrith planned this? No way
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Welp. Goodbye random kid
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Thank God for Food. But what about water :0
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Let me guess. Mc will stay there for the longest? And if time doesnt collide with real world. I’d Gladly take it
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I send a mood swing system. Or a psychopath system xD
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Mood
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Actually a good start!!
"Listen, the tournaments are just around the corner and acting like this won't give you a higher chance of keeping your seat." hissed the lightning queen as she grasped onto her crystal sceptre like it was the only way she could control her rage. - Flamefalco2yrตอบกลับถึง SEP1A
OK, thanks, I'll keep that advice, everyone's writing is different so it is a bit harder to adapt. But I'll try my best!
Then it got awkward between them. Kashi was wondering how to communicate with him. At the same time, they wanted to get out of the dungeon knowing it had failed due to the incident from that person. Speaking of that person, who is that? He has the power to destroy anything. Why does he have that much power? Countless thoughts spiral through Kashi's mind. Then Flame taps his shoulder to snap out his mind as he was gesturing. He was confused at first, then after a while, he been asking for paper and something to write with. Kashi goes through his backpack only to find some scrap paper and a pen. Then he shows it to Flame, He quickly snatches it as he begins to write. After some scribbling, He showed it to Kashi only to said - Flamefalco2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Must protecc
"We have the same classes. Stick to me and don't look at anyone." - Flamefalco2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Good thing that you educate people of what Autism and raising awareness. This is my favorite novel now. Looking forward to more chapters.
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Flamefalco2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 1 Reunion
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So you decided to play with my feelings? I see how is it.
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