bennylokku
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i hope he doesnt want to become one of those harem wanting idiots
why would he chase after tehm
hehe
i dont really know how to give tips. i am a reader, so i do not know how to say it. best advice i could give is if you ask your fellow authors and you see how other works are written regarding the words used, how plots are developed. it wouldnt be right for me to correct you when im not a author. what i did was just point out a small part