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The truth is losing the plot, if you want an imperfect character, there have to be consequences... that is, punitive punishment for being imperfect or acting like an idiot... that is, if you spend your entire life drunk and drinking, don't expect him to be a top quality athlete... also, the problem is that it doesn't go with the rhythm of haikyuu. Third is that you include things that don't go with the plot...it's excessive. but again they are advice, which you must understand for the plot that a book must follow a line so that it is logical... it is the understanding of the plot by the readers

Does a practice match last five chapters? try to do it in one.

It focuses on many things except volleyball, most of the chapters go the other way, we do not see the expected development of the characters and how they act...the characters accept the protagonist, just like that, his way of being is somewhat scratchy and does not end up fulfilling what the author promised...I mean it gives clues that it is very good, but it does not give many explanations...it seems busy in the development and contains a bit of comedy that can be tiresome because it is tainted in large quantities by irony. It's a good story, it just needs polishing some parts

It's true but he has been acting like an idiot the entire series, with an irresponsible father who appears to be a child...his personality is strange, he is supposedly intelligent. but he seems to have no brain connections then...he has the personality of a fighter not a vollyball player, he would do better in another sport, tennis, mma...where the responsibility is totally his and not anyone else's.

The curious thing is that karasuno allows that. Even the teachers, you should write Dragon Ball, there is anger and madness at least they would make sense... I mean, the character has been acting like an idiot for many chapters... it seems as if he only cared about himself and no one else, something that goes against what Haikyuu is, even Ushihijma thought about his team and was a real one.

You have been extending the plot for ten chapters, a copy oast appears, first the MC mentions how the council is corrupt, then Hiruzen mentions that the Uchihas are a problem, then Kakashi hesitates and then Danzo appears, at this point in the story he has repeated the same thing about 10 times, it makes the plot feel slow and he does not advance on a whim to make more filler chapters.

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