Nice it actually very interesting; seem like you are improving. The plot is amazing, an ability that is the combination of other ability, but has a side effect.

Good job!................................Improve in your beginning and story background...Keep it up....................................Amazing

Can't wait for the other chapters.

Keep it up and work on your mistakes. Try using editors like grammarly to improve your grammar. And again I will be waiting for more.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊