luminous1_vanqu10
I like One piece.I like carefree main characters with no plans for the future.....
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luminous1_vanqu103 months agoแปะแล้วI have read up to the 20th chapter and so far it's nice.
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง Rexburn12
maybe
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง Silent_stiele
don't worry just read it first and make some edits. I do that , I don't know how to detailly write fight scenes so a little AI helps.
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง Ballad
but it's powerful too
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I'm really excited for a story where the mc isn't the leader in the front but controls everything and keeps it in order.maybe someone will write a story about it too.so Anybody......
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง TYR
well it's his character that the author gavelet's give it a try
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799
just think the mc has a little personality similar to Homelander.he has problems and he is strong.and can grow stronger in the future
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799
YES thank you. At last someone said it.I was planning to explain it in the coming chapter. can you add this 'man child part in a review for the story please it will be helpful
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoตอบกลับถึง Johnny_James_2731
- luminous1_vanqu106 months agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
does Chinese Gus have a thing for long legs I noticed it in some other stories like the legendary mechanic and others .
