ObservantReader

for some reason I always imagine Kaizer to have blue hair. but then I see the fandom and remembered he had black hair

im not too sure, but from what I can understand: he's saying that Eden's appearance was very sudden and it leaves a gap in the story. but again, that is what I got ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

lol, no worries. we all make mistakes, I don't mind reminding you if i come across any mistakes that you missed. besides, all mistakes can help you learn to be a better writer, so its just a different way of learning. you've already done a good work, everything else is just you improving

author, everything below here is a repeat

dw, the more you live the more you will see it (and the more it will see you 😈)

at least its not a colour 😔

I will definitely have some resentments for you author, now I can only mourn how broke I am

besides, if the title was something like "Seventh Reader in the Body of the Seventh Son in the Seventh Continent of the Seventh Kingdom" then it would take all the mystery of the story, with something like "Seventy Seventh Seven" it gets you to wonder what that means which in turns gets more viewers to click on it. so be proud that you didn't give in to that scum's wish

then he's scum for trying to make your title more "WN-like" Seventy Seventh Seven is good for me