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Not sure if you still care, but I started updating again.

As someone who is currently writing A 100 fic, I agree. Canon events are good ways to see where you are in the timeline, as they are clear indicators for moving forward. However, copying and pasting the story and every single event is beyond lazy writing. Only major events should be really repeated, while some events shouldn't even be mentioned unless they actively affect the story. What this author has done, is use every little event possible that was in the original show, regardless of his MCs presence. Doing that makes it seem as though no matter what the MC does, the story remains the same... Which makes it boring.

Lincoln isn't even a healer, bruh

Yeah, how would they know your language if you, the author, doesn't even know your language?

Maybe it was mentioned, but I don't remember. where is he getting all of this iron?

I've been there

pfft. if it was a large and rather strong tornado on a clear day, you'd be able to see it only from about 10-20 miles away. And that's only if you're on a vantage point. In the forest with high trees surrounding you? A couple hundred miles is beyond ridiculous. Then again, I don't even know why I'm wasting my time even commenting on this. There's so many absurdities in this story that I'm losing brain cells reading it.

Black Bear hunting is fairly common where I'm from. Though the meat is greasy, gamey, and even stringy, some people like it.

Jesus this sentence...