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No, on the contrary, I did not say to make him a robot or something like that, but rather the way he interacts. Yes, he will feel accomplished and other things, but he should not be influenced by others when they congratulate him and other things, because he understands that these accomplishments are not attractive.

Disappointing, same outstanding technique of the Fourth Hokage where is the creativity, he should take his own way and that technique he learned is a cheat

The funniest thing is that old MC is stupid and gets into a fight with the children, hahaha

Ino is not fit to be a mc, she should at least have abilities and not be a burden

The problem is that the MC is a killer who controls his emotions. Such successes should be handled calmly and without exaggeration. Read the chapters and see how many times you said "I felt proud" or "I felt accomplished." Isn't that an exaggeration? If you're portraying a character as a killer who controls his emotions, this kind of exaggeration and deviation from his character ruins the story.

Disappointing, the Fourth Hokage's technique is his, why does he follow someone else's footsteps? Why doesn't he do his own way? I really hate the Fourth Hokage's technique because all the mutants want to learn it and learn it easily as if it's something normal, even though Minato was the only one who excelled. If it was easy, Itachi, Kakashi, and other more talented people would have learned it.

What the hell is this idiot he didn't even learn how to move chakra inside his body and now he wants to get it out? If anyone is going to write a Naruto fanfic they should read more about the basics because this is just stupid now

A failed novel, as if it were a Chinese novel. Imagine he wants to enter a state of Senjutsu, and he hasn't even mastered chakra well? What is this stupidity? He hasn't even learned how to fight, hahaha. Brother, whoever reads this garbage and sees it as normal, congratulations on your backward mind. In addition to that, it's aimless, boring, and frankly negative.

Is yahito will stay??? He is veeeeeeeeeery annoying

Can you stop exaggerating? Isn't he a killer and in control of his feelings? You say a lot: "He felt proud, he felt accomplished." What the hell is this? He's a killer. He shouldn't be fooled by these simple things.