Oh I understand, working with characters and finding the right look with his/her appearance is challenging, especially with someone as ‘pampered’ as Lith. I think a more rugged approach with his personality would be a good contrast and give him more of a handsome look then a pretty boy look. To me, that works best for characters and is more appealing. As for his personality, I think that it’s fairly shallow to have him be a complete jokester with these women. Maybe a more subtle approach by proving himself to them that he is and will be capable of taking care of them instead of the overly perverted route he goes most of the time. This could also tie into a plot point in the later story where Lith realizes that he no long we has to prove himself and that could be a driving force to accomplish more for himself alone and not for validation or romance, just pride

I‘m still of the opinion that his hair should be more of a textured crop with a bit more length to it. The long hair… it doesn’t seem manly nor does it seem like he’s very masculine. Makes him like one of those pampered young masters when he should be focused on becoming far more independent and growing on a personal level

Also what is with Alex? You mean Erich?

I don’t think think is the best option, I mean, you can make her the empress of the light elves under an alliance and use the other girl’s marriage as justification of combining all of the allied factions such as Oni, GSE, and Alfheim. In fact, marrying Tia as well and giving her the title of the Silber Empress let’s her be a solidified power in Erich’s galactic ambitions… just my thoughts

This is my second time reading this book but what happened to the Visigoth girl Ghazi was supposed to marry?

Maybe in the UK… in the US you failed by over 10%!

Sometimes wish he would shut up, dude needs to take some things way more seriously

Just gotta say, the long hair… I personally am not a fan of it, it just seems unmanly. It is your novel 100% and I understand you like this style. Yet, Lith seems too much like a young master type. I’d say a shorter, messy cut would work wonders for him.

Gotta get his succubus queen right?

Hana in the harem… at some point please!!!

Me me me

I’m guessing Aurora isn’t included since they already know of her… right?

‘Million’ instead of billion, or 500,000,000 instead of 500,000. The math ain’t mathing

When was she going to join the harem

Any reason why feck is in there? It looks weird

Hope to see Yashina in the harem

Didn’t he just say he hadn’t proposed to Kuroka?

I’m 100% on board with Esdeath in the harem

Please add her to the harem

Imma be honest, I assumed they were already dating