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Roopa_sree

Roopa_sree

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2021-06-04 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    The concept of your story is fresh as the world background is quite interesting with the different countries and creatures. The sentences can be shorter as writing long sentences make it confusing.The character background is quite good but I hope more information is given as the story progresses!Overall great story:)

    The Dream Saga
    แฟนตาซี · wookie0_
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    The description is AWESOMEEE

    The sun shone with gentle radiance, melting the fog and casting a breath of vitality into the biodiversity. Dairy trucks drove on the vacant streets, delivering packets of milk to each household. A newspaper boy pedalled his bicycle, carrying a bundle of newspapers behind him.
    Psychic Parasite
    ไซไฟ · Overlord_Venus
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    I really liked the description of every action and how you got into the details but not too much of it.I was able to visualise the actions of the characters.The story has an unique concept!

    Psychic Parasite
    ไซไฟ · Overlord_Venus
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    It is a unique idea to start of with and the plot is really interesting.Quick to read and the language is quite good.Great Job! Maybe longer chapters?

    Evolution to GOD
    สมัยใหม่ · REaper
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistrATrSU

    Aww thanksss!!

    18 & still clueless
    วัยรุ่น · Roopa_sree
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  • Roopa_sree
    Roopa_sree2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Manish_Gupta_7212

    Thanks for the feedback!

    18 & still clueless
    วัยรุ่น · Roopa_sree
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