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PLEASE NO ROMANCEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a great novel, with an interesting use of the ninjutsu element. The MC is intelligent, well-spoken, and sometimes funny. I liked the focus on the wind element, which is quite interesting and rare. The lack of romance didn’t bother me—in fact, I even preferred it. I also loved his summons. POSSIBLE SPOILER!!!!! Some counterpoints: the MC is very ruthless and cares little about innocent people or his methods. I understand that it's a ninja world with different morals and ethics, but I found it a bit excessive in his case. He’s also quite unfocused, constantly making countless plans to do a million things that aren't always necessary. In that sense, the only thing he ever does is train and fight to get stronger. While I understand the need for that, a more relaxed chapter or a hobby would help make the MC feel more realistic. Another thing I missed in the novel was the presence of emotional bonds. I understand his fear, but it bothered me that all his relationships were purely based on calculations, strategies, and politics. He never hesitates to protect someone or take a risk for them. I also felt a lack of affection. For example, the Third Hokage isn’t exactly the best person in the ninja world, but he clearly cared about the MC and wanted to help him. However, the MC always saw it as a trick or assumed there were 50 plans behind it. In short, I felt the absence of emotional connections beyond training, fighting, and getting stronger. At one point, I thought things might be different when he considered helping his friend, but in the end, he gave up. I understand why, and it didn’t bother me too much, but the series lacked real friendships and relationships. I also thought it could be different with Naruto, but it was the same thing. It doesn’t have to be romantic affection, but I wanted to see him develop some meaningful bond with someone. Despite loving the writing, the fights, and other developments, I felt that the MC lacked a human side. He seems like a machine when it comes to plans, politics, training, and combat. I’d suggest the author consider this—either in this book or in another one—because affection and relationships are important; they make the MC feel human. It doesn’t need to be all the time, but it helps. A little warmth in the heart, and even though emotions can be a "weakness," weaknesses are important.
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That was so col!!!!!! More!!!! And i want to se or mc use more daos.