Well, I think that the only thing similar to Purge is the exact event, no more other things. I just added that event to start a story. Plot is not just about like Purge. It's completely different. Anyway, thanks for the review.

Story is good and characters are cool. It is easy to imagine and I think that this novel had just came back on updating which is nice. In writing, I wonder why you keep on adding the title and episode on each chapter. It is unnecessary, not gonna lie. So far, it's good. Keep it up.

If I'll be brutally honest here, well, I can't say anything wrong on the story itself as it was on your style. However, as I read, some spaces are double spaced. Also, there are some unnecessary symbols like "—" and "," where you could just end it with a "." I just found your Punctuation Marks Usage as wrong here. Anyway, the story is still good. Keep it up and not the wrong usages.

Somehow, the first two chapters got me confusing, not gonna lie. Overall, the story of this fanfic is great that I read it so fast. I hope that you'll make each chapters longer, so each waiting time is long worth it. I'm just suggesting it. I promise that it will work more. To sum it all, the story and Loki are best. (sorry if my grammar is bad hehe.)

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This novel is a high quality story. You can feel that it was that great. You'll get hooked up on it by just reading the prologue. The last line in the prologue is the coolest. Keep it up and Good luck on your writing journey!!

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It was kind of fun reading, not gonna lie. There are chapters that are mostly built up with monologues and some are full of dialogues. For me, many commas in a chapter equal good. Overall, your novel has a good start. Keep it up and Good luck on your novel journey!

Hello! I am "Seishi_". I'm the author of this novel, who will give a shameless review on my own novel. This novel is focusing on an 18-year-old teenage man, who was forced to perform a ritual and take its risk so that he can take revenge for the killer and his allies. He will go on an adventure around the world to find each of them. As the novel progresses, we can see the main character's development throughout the story. I'll try to be consistent as possible so that you will not drop and forget this novel of my own. I would like you to support this novel. I'll always be grateful for the things you will do to support me. Thank you and always have a nice day.

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So, first of all, the novel is funny af. I took an interest on this novel when I saw the narrative line, "The God with Baby Diapers." Albeit, there are some errors like wrong usage of punctuation marks. That's okay since you just started doing the novel. Good luck and Keep it up.

I have a habit of not using the same words that I had written in a chapter. If I use the word "throw", I'll find other words with the same meaning like "hurled". I'm trying to not have word repetition. Sorry about that😂.

So far it is good. Kinda like the idea of having good brother-sister relationship. Although it is decent, there are errors like wrong usage of punctuation marks and lack of capitalization usage. Also, you need to update as it has been 2 months since you posted the 7th chapter. It is okay to have some errors. You'll grow. Good luck and keep it up.

I like the concept of this novel. It is quite engaging. It is also in First POV. There are already some actions at the first chapter which is nice. Although there are some wrong usage of Punctuation marks, I just ignored it. Good luck and Keep it up.

The novel is pretty great. I want to see more from the protagonist and the flow of the story. Although it has minor errors like wrong usage of punctuation marks, I just ignored it since you're just starting like me. Good luck to you WSA Journey and Keep it up.

Hmm..After reading, I will say that the novel is easy to understand and to imagine because of your descriptive paragraphs/dialogues in the novel. The hype becomes stronger every chapter. Good luck to your WSA Journey and Keep it up.

The whole story is good. So many timeskips and the X-Virus is kinda similar to COVID-19. I didn't expect your chapters to have so many "—", and the first chapter doesn't have a speech, which is quite shocking. In overall, I had fun reading yours. Keep it up and good luck on your writing journey.

The novel itself is good. Every chapter became more adventurous for the MC. Although there are some clear misusage of space at punctuation marks, it is just minor mistakes and can be edited. Keep up on doing your novel. You'll reach a higher style.

It is a good story with very detailed descriptions. I also like the concept that associates with the 7 sins plus a MC with an arrogant attitude. Reading a long chapter destroyed my imagination but that's my problem, it is not yours. It is completely great. Keep up on doing your novel and Good luck on your progress.

Hello! I am just a shameless author, supporting his own novel hehe. Anyway, this story's main character was formerly a good and kind teen until a disaster(for him) fall upon. I hope you'll support this novel to see more chapters and the interesting part is just coming up.