Mystrixxa1_Trish
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Usually solitary, so to escape into my silence I write. I write with a mission, I play with words, I print my imagination to each page as mystery unfolds into words.
2021-05-29 JoinedTrinidad & Tobago
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Mystrixxa1_Trish3 years agoCommentedok well I guess the transition or maybe the flow is missing something. A reader should be able to tell.
- Mystrixxa1_Trish3 years agoCommented
Unusual but interesting I like it
- Mystrixxa1_Trish3 years agoCommented
somehow chapter 2 seems like another story. maybe it should be introduced in the preceding chapters . Chapter three seemed like the actual continuation of chapter 1. but I am following this story, it's nice.👍
- Mystrixxa1_Trish3 years agoCommented
needs edit in last line
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some editing will benefit. I think it's good otherwise. I like it.👍
