J_Writing

Oh dang, I've been caught! I shall correct!

It's fun to say. xD

Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. You should feel incredibly proud of yourself. The way this story unfurls gives the reader something to look forward to in every chapter; mystery, chaos, intrigue and a bit of comedy as well. I am obsessed with this novel. Noe is a truly unique character that shines a light on the autistic community; he is gentle and intuitive. I don't really have anything to critique, The novel is a little fast paced but I like that, I think it attributes to the story. My dear author, excellent job.

Well hello....

First and foremost, I love the concept. The comedy relief that God gives is just excellent; I don't find it insulting at all and in fact I think that God would be somewhat laze faire. So great job there. I love the MCs sassy attitude and big heart, you give a lot of emphasis on self love and I think we need to see more of that in life. You give enough attention to descriptions that I can imagine most of it myself but you still steer the reader in the direction you want which I think is great; I love descriptive text. For critiques it's definitely grammar and sentence structure. I would also recommend Grammarly and even writing in google docs before posting. That way you can do an edit check; but don't be too harsh on yourself because it's hard to edit. I noticed that you said you live in Asia and I think your writing for English when it's not your first language (I'm assuming and if I'm wrong I'm so sorry) is actually very good! With more practice, peer reviews and writing I think you'll have our ridiculous language down. (I am from America and even I don't get my language right all the time). All in all you have done a wonderful job and I want to see more. I have added this to my library and can't wait top see where this goes. I am happy to do a peer review with you any time!