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I lose motivation fast for them. I start the story in one direction, but quickly trap myself within my own rules. I hope for the Elemental Gems to break that cycle.

Yes. Wherever the mana builds up and is released, it takes on the nearest element it can find. Some regions could produce hundreds of different elements, while others could be limited to just a few.

A new series stirs, the spark of life grows stronger. Ojero and Orpham, brothers, their trials are not yet over. One rises while the other falls, but without each other they are nothing. Light and dark, chaos and order, eternity and the end. Where in the disarray with glory be gained? You'll soon find out.

It will be out soon.

Yes, The Dark Mark was dropped, and is currently being remade into another story

Thanks for the review! I will say the "gasp" moments will definitely decrease over time. Remember, Ojero's life now is nothing like what it was. Everything is new and different from what he expects, so as he acclimates it will change. As for childishness, he is a noble used to being glorified and complimented, and is now in a new situation where he has no power. In that sort of case, even adults become childish.

Tyrion Lannister would certainly agree!

Its funny you make this comment the very day I decided to sit down and continue it. I'll try to make it when I can!

Put them all in agility and spiderman swing your way through the house at one month old