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Will read eventually if no-harem
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- raawwr_chibi1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 386 update on stories
- raawwr_chibi2mthแปะแล้ว
Review after volume 1. Have been enjoying this novel. I tend to not really like novels that have some Japanese elements in it that include a MC that can be naive or oblivious and the honorifics can sometimes be cringe, but I'm liking the writing. The honorifics flow nicely and it doesn't feel forced. I think it helps that there isn't a -kun and -chan mentioned. It's still early into the novel, but I do hope we can have more for character design. I thought the first human antagonist was kind of 2 dimensional with how he didn't understand himself and kept trying to convince that he only felt one emotion towards his friends. What got him into thinking this type of way? if it's just an inferiority complex then it's kind of confusing to me how he was only obsessed with tormenting MC and friend, and he wasn't interested in anyone else. Also, hope with the little info so far telling about Aki's obsession with Haru, we can also know how much Haru had a obsession with Aki before the apocalypse. She just seems to have more emotional investment for MC compared to him (excluding the part where he accepts her as a zombie 😜), so I'd personally like little tid bits of quirky/kind of abnormal things he does for her since his friends can already tell it's a abnormal relationship. Just so that it seems mutual with both having equal and matching amount of investment. Hope to read more author!
- raawwr_chibi2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
welp this is a surprise. Hope Haru has something/quirk for Aki to match this energy. "Perfect match that's obsessed with each other,"
"Hmm... Oh right!... It must be those cameras that she secretly installed in my room while I was pretending to sleep. I thought using and covering body pillows with blanket would keep her suspicion low, but I guess she must have install cameras with heat detectors." - raawwr_chibi7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 354 Outside the Secret Realm
- raawwr_chibi7mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 231 Leaving for the Martial Meeting
- raawwr_chibi9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I really like this quote for the romance? [img=Feeling it]
Like the quote I've once read in the internet, 'A Hero is willing to sacrifice you for the world, but a Villain will be willing to sacrifice the world for you' shit like that... I don't know if I wrote that quote correctly since I've only came across that quote few months ago. - raawwr_chibi2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
i like what you did here. The regular words like mother, father, etc won't seem as repetitive. It feels like your novel is also making use of more vocabulary which I always appreciate. 👍
(1) - Dam is the opposite of a sire. A sire impregnates, a dam gets pregnant. It's usually used for animals, and dam does have female connotations, but I figure the animal related background makes sense considering the setting. And dam is an unusual enough word that it won't be too jarring to see it applied to a male character (let me know what you think tho!)