Fang_Xiuying

what's missing?🤔

simply perfect🙇‍♂️

as expected, you got the reaction right!😏

Thank you my friend! His analysis was incredibly valuable and enlightening. I am truly grateful that you took the time to share your thoughts and insights. With your help, I'm sure I can refine and improve the story in a way that will make readers even more engaged. Again, thank you and happy reading to you!

It's difficult to answer this without giving away spoilers. The relic stole the Earth guy's destiny, along with his memories, and the boy died while cultivating. So it was a fusion, yes. So that the boy can find peace, the protagonist needs to resolve his regret and that didn't take long. Furthermore, often, when the protagonist acts outside the norm, he is acting to gain points of hatred or affection, his demonic lineage is linked to the 7 deadly sins to evolve the lineage he has to act accordingly. These defects are essential for the evolution of this protagonist, as it is not just about evolving in cultivation.👌

Excellent, your feedback was valuable bro. I'll polish the next few chapters to make sure it doesn't feel like the new personality will be permanent!

I understand, to avoid giving spoilers, I'll just say that there are three souls involved. The relic did not reincarnate the protagonist in a new body, as his ability is not reincarnation, but rather stealing destinies. She basically stole the destiny of a person from Earth, who was supposed to reincarnate in the boy's body, and merged these three memories: those of the 15-year-old boy, the guy from Earth and those of the protagonist.

The idea was to give a twist and make the protagonist's evolution in a unique way. Therefore, I left some hints that he would act this way, as his situation was not limited to a simple reincarnation; it was more like a fusion between an experienced cultivator and an inexperienced youth, with the memories of someone from Earth. My inspiration came from some works that I admire. Although the beginning may seem frustrating, I needed this initial flaw to justify its evolution. Basically, I had two options: make a "cattle" protagonist or... well, the other option and as you can see, I chose the second. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! 😊

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to respond or not to respond? the author is known as small spoiler terror😑