Matthew_Dominic_3591

bruh permanent 8 gates are a bad thing they are literal safety nets for the human body thats why they are gates, barriers what was the author smoking??? XD

i dont know whats so chinese about this? the translator or the author kept it pretty vague i can only see some chinese manners and shamelessness lol but its funny so its okay at least for me? i just dont like it when chinese authors praise china so much that its like the pcp are gonna check their fanfiction for their level of nationalism and shit which there are none here

i hope kiyoshi doesnt just steal the uchiha bodies but the accumulated knowledge and secrets of the uchiha clan throughout its life and it would be a hella large knowledge since theyre a branch family of the otsutsuki just the eyes without the refined jutsu, technique and other knowledge to support it would be quite lacking kiyoshi could totally make himself a secret tree to store all the uchiha eyes he wont be using as nurishment for his own uchiha eyes for some extra Izanagi lives he could just make decoy books and add exploding tags on them to cover his tracks kinda hope he saves some uchiha babies or kids tho its kinda sad that obito would just kill them and maybe izumi uchiha to babysit them the uchiha could maaaaybe be reborn within the senju umbrella (although its just tsunade and kiyoshi right now)

is this chapter title a stroke? XD

would be amazing if if shuichi could just teleport a whole lot of rasenshurikens with guiding thunder to a pre marked kanabi bridge full of iwa shinobi maybe even mark a lot of the outside of the bridge too XD or maybe do a multi shadowclone jutsu and have them all transform into humming birds to kamikaze lotus bomb into the iwa army to kill them

now make tenten a puppet mecha she can control while inside it naruto puppets are really untapped in fics maybe have it be mix of incredibles ball bots and pennys spider mecha its primary weapons would be the strong and sharp arms what would slice and whip her enemies and its round body being a big cannon ball to break defensive earthwalls maybe it could even have guns like the overwatch hamond for long ranged attacks i hope kiyoshi could mask his wood style with a puppet shell maybe even fight like doctor octopus and asura with a whole lot of puppet arms to beat and puppet more puppets with

yes the president has shield and sword and a whole lot of other organizarions under his belt but the MC has a reliable way to train super soldiers no? with enough knowledge on cultivation he could probably make a flawed cultivation method to make ordinary peak human agents and soldiers into captain americas with a bit of time the MC could definitely cut a deal with nick fury then if he could get a hold of him through culson by being a opurtunist thief that prey on other criminal gangs sooner or later shield would like to see such a promising agent in their ranks maybe even be a consultant with high pay for generating tangible results by training some super soldiers if he could make magical contract for his students to never spread his teachings even better, shield would want him even more also yojiro hanma would fit right in with the building destroyers of hells kitchen like luke cage, iron fist and punisher plus i just used yojiro hanma as a power level reference cuz the guy can fight an armed force barehanded with a bit of cunning the right aplication of violence the mans kinda like half of an asgardian but a lot faster and a lot less bullet proof if yojiro hanma put his mind to it and tried modern weapons and warfare hed be stronger than captain america (he aint a brute, there is a science to fighting afterall) a human predator not a sexual predetor......although he is a rapist..just not a serial rapist..hes a great specimen of human physical potential but still a garbage person im just praising his power not his moral compass

hope Kiyoshi wears wrap around shades to cover his sharingan use plus it would totally hide his eyes intentions i also kinda hope kiyoshi makes extra puppet arms like hes Asura (from Wrath of the Asura game) would be great if the arms had guns and assassins creed blades on the top of their knuckles like katars with chakra flow, maybe nature transformation for wind or lightning and chakra metal he could make long lightsabers

wonder if Felixs unique i cast magic is like stars and stripes New Order? that would be hella awesome maybe he could even say "I cast Muscles!" (and hed become a child version of captain america) for when he needs more physical stamina

why cant noah just be a model??? then when he has the strength of at least yojiro hanma or hiegher he could totally cut a deal with the american president or the shield director to make super soldiers also if you wanna get paid ya just gotta open a patreon