The design and story progress is Good. I have a hunch that it can be one of the greatest Idol novel in the future 😝 Just keep writing and Good Work.

The first chapter rid great and I am hoping to read next chapters soon. Upload fast to get votes and upload in constant flow.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

I am new here and also wrote a novel but it's not that great. But I really like yours. The introduction gives the complete details of the world and not only that but i really liked your idea of using gravity and despite the superpower ,they don't fight but race. It's really a unique kind of novel. I read many comics and novels but I think your ideas are interesting. It's a really good novel and I think people will like it. Keep it up. [img=update]