gosh one of the best novel I've ever read so far. I like how the author don't rush with the story but takes time and gives the best to let the readers enjoy it. Keep up the Good work, Author.

.................................................. it's Really A good Start. The Plot seems clear and simple. but there's more than meets the eye, so I'm pretty sure they'll be alot of interesting scenario coming up for the upcoming chapters. Keep up the Good work, Author.

....................................................... low-key type story. it's good. writing quality can be improved. story develodevelopment seems a little fast paced. character design are fine. Kuddos for the author and can do better. keep up the good work . thank you!

.................................................. I really Love the Story. it really has a nice touch to it. kuddos for the author. keep it up.

.................................................. Writing Quality is awesome story development is fine character design needs improvement updating stability needs more dedication world background is okay

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.............................................. ..... The story is so far interesting. It has a unique plot. and also the world background is detailed and overall story development is awesone keep it up Author. giving my full support here.

.................................................. Interesting plot written by this author. I really love it. the writing style is really great. keep it up and I hope for more in the future

.................................................. This story had a unique plot with unique characters with unique names. the story is well made and the wrwritings are well done. keep it up author. and do write more

................................................... This story is really amazing and I love it. lots of plot twist and wow so many unexpected turns and events. keep up author. you're the best.

.................................................. Really love the way how the author writes this amazing story. also the story is romantic in such a way . keep it up author, you have my full support.

.................................................. It's a good read. the author needs to keep up on some particular things but still the author gave their best into writing. really appreciate it as a reader. keep it up Author.

.................................................... OMG this is one of the good novels I have read so far. love the story plot. and also love the way how the story moves on. hoping for more in the future dear author.

.................................................. Writing Quality is excellent. I love the story Development and also the Character designs were awesome!! The storyline is so unique . I really love it. I hope for more from the author. keep it up author.

.................................................. Well written Story. really appreciate the author. we can see that the author gave their best. it's really dedication and also love the character designs and development . can't wait for more. keep it up author.

.................................................. Over whelming story. it is written so well. I really like how the author gives their best in writing the story. so far so good. and also I can't wait for more in the future . love the author very much.

.................................................. The Author did a Great Job on writing a story that has some quite unique taste. I really am looking forward to more chapters . From the Writings we know that The Author is new, but we can see that the Author gave their best in writing to it. Thank you for your hard work and hoping for more in the future. keep up the good work. really appreciated as a Reader.

you got it. but it'll have a different taste

............................................................................. The MC is dense, quite stupid and silly. Interesting Plot, but needs more you know, the spice And also too weird but okay, *turns back to go away* Who ever wrote this, good luck. Wait wait wait... Isn't this my book?! Welp...

The plot is good and the storyline is unique . if I were you I won't try to add things suddenly which you might add or have added on some parts but it's understandable . other than that we can see that you gave your all in the novel, Good Job. also I won't say much cause I'm new too in writing other than that it's Oki Good Luck and Keep it up. I support you.