Cheers for the update! I'ill go back and change them shortly.

Ironically enough, later on it will change to the third perspective. I found it clearer since I will delve into different characters and constantly switching from POV isn't that great. Hope you enjoyed the chapter!

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Thanks for the compliment, midterms are just around the corner. So unfortunately I can't promise anything. But I'll definitely try to become more consistent.

Thanks for the heads-up!

I'm all good, I've simply been busy with school and some other things. Thank you for the comment!

No, you're right it's meant to be ichor but for some reason Grammarly always notes it as a nonexistent word. I'll go over the chapters and reedit that.

No, with home I mean morr like a place he cares for and sees himself living in. He wants to live a proper life seeing that his previous one ended prematurely. That doesn't mean he will just stay still until he dies.

The chapters get longer later on. I didn't know what the wished-for length was for a chapter and thought of them as pages. I've also been thinking about reediting after volume 1 and will probably add more content about the 10 years walk. Thanks for the review!

Romance, Probably in volume 2. That's why its not an added tag yet.

Almost all of my beginning chapters are way too short in my opinion. I didn't know the length of a chapter or how I wanted to pace my story. I'm thinking of finishing volume 1 (for which I have a basic outline) before going back and reediting. If you find any other aspects of the story confusing or a bit glossed over be sure to point them out as it will significantly help me in refining my writing style.

Euhm, It appears the writer might have accidentally counted the years before he actually met him. Whoops! this will be changed shortly.

It's a very interesting concept as it leaves a lot of possibilities for future chapters. The story is well written and there have already been some background lore that could prove to be a foundation for later chapters.

I also share your opinion that my chapters are way too short. That's something I slowly am trying to change as I start feeling more comfortable on how to write. Descriptions idem. I will probably go back and re-edit once I come to a point where the story could take a break (probably after first volume).

Each chapter is very well described while also keeping you interested. The conflict is realistic and the story flows well. Recommended to read.

I always appreciate feedback on grammatical errors. So thnx for pointing this out.

Well written with good humor aspects to it. Also like your author notes, it makes us get to know you in a way. I have high hopes for this book.

The book cover is fantastic as it made me excited to read the novel even before opening it. I also like the way how Gabriel is described. It's a mix of mystery and fear.

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