Demons_and_I
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Demons_and_I1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 440 God's Plan.- Demons_and_I1dตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5Ch 476 Four Way Battle (1).
- Demons_and_I3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 440 God's Plan.
- Demons_and_I3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 439 Conflict of the Trial.
- Demons_and_I10dตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5Ch 465 Rage (2).
- Demons_and_I12dตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
Hmmm... Who knows? •́ ͜ʖ •̀ How are you liking this book so far? Are there some things you'd like to see change, or is the progression fine to you? Please share your thoughts...
"Is that so..." Her eyes sparkled for a bit, but that was all. Her face remained impassive. - Demons_and_I16dตอบกลับถึง Luca_Basso
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{You have obtained a Rare-grade Weapon: Bloody Katana}. - Demons_and_I1mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
I'm glad you remembered such a small detail...
Cain didn't understand what the old man was trying to say. He could understand the words, but not their intent. - Demons_and_I1mthตอบกลับถึง Manmeet_Singh_8886
- Demons_and_I1mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5Ch 436 Dissonance.
- Demons_and_I1mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
Who knows? 😏
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Demons_and_I1mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
Bro... RIP Toriyama 🤧❤️.
Current, under the effects of five times the gravity under tentimes his body weight, he could only swing the blade five times. It seemed almost pitiful. However, if it was a normal person in his shoes, they would have already died from internal bleeding a long time ago. - Demons_and_I1mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
😂
Cain nodded then turned to Susan. Seeing him move in close to whisper into her ears, a furious blush appeared on her face. Cain held onto her hand softly. However, his next words made her face turn serious. - Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง Bored_Reader_289
No. I'm just narrating what Cain was experiencing from his point of view. All those words simply mean he fell unconscious. I just had to add some dramatic flare... 🌚👍
All of a sudden, he lost his ability to respire, then his bodily functions ceased to respond to him. - Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
He is. For now... 😈
"What is your reason for this? Are you planning on building your own harem now that you've finally conquered your portion of the world? Is that it?" - Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง Echelon_5
Hey, this romantic subplot has to progress someway, somehow, right? 🤷.
"What is your reason for this? Are you planning on building your own harem now that you've finally conquered your portion of the world? Is that it?" - Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง Bored_Reader_289Ch -1 Prologue: Thousand Millennium War... (1)
- Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง VividlyLucid29
Edgelord? I don't think so. Also, what do you mean by arrogant? I don't think any of them act arrogantly.
'He's back.' Evangeline thought. She had seen Cain come through the front door but pretended not to. To her, It wasn't her business what he did. She was still a bit curious about where he had gone too, and why he had been gone for so long... - Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง VividlyLucid29
141 the (20) is 161.
Agility: 141. (20). - Demons_and_I2mthตอบกลับถึง VividlyLucid29
He did. Cain wanted more information about the nature of Dan and Hunter's relationship. And when Steve says family, don't take it literally. The family Steve is referring to isn't an actual family per se. I'll leave it at that.
"He's a bit anti-social, but that doesn't stop his popularity from increasing one bit. Weird world we live in, and right?"