Thanks for the feedback, I understand that there aren't enough details in my story and I'm working on that. You said you believe some of my grammar is not corrected the right way. Can you give me an example of a mistake? I'll fix it.

I've never read any novels of this genre, so it's all new to me. It is a nice read, the only criticism I have is the lack of good grammar, to improve, you could write chapters in a Google Doc, and check your spelling and grammar. Keep writing, author!

I usually don't read these kinds of novels, but this one was interesting and had good grammar, I will keep reading this book, great work author!

_______________________________________________________________ This is a great story, it's interesting and well written. Good job, author!

This book was an interesting read and I enjoyed it. Keep up with the great work author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I love this novel, and I will keep reading it. However, I saw many simple grammar mistakes, I can help if you want me to, but warning, I am not that good a grammar myself. Keep up the great work, author!

This is amazing! The first chapter is already interesting and very long too. (I can't write even half as much as that) I'm looking forward to more chapters!✍🏼

Wow...I can never write THAT much for a chapter, great job!

Here's Ghost:

Here are the characters:

_______________ This is amazing! The story is very interesting and I liked it. It's a great book, so great work author! {A power stone for you!}

That's sad.

Good first chapter. [img=update]

Thanks for the review and the advice, I paused the story so I could fix them and try to make it a little longer.😊

------------------------------------------------------------------------------ This book was a fun read and I liked it. It's a great book, so great work author! {A power stone for you!}

------------------------------------------------------------------------------ This book had an interesting first chapter. It's a nice book, so I hope you will continue it. Keep updating, author!👍

Thank you, I'm glad you like it. It's paused so I could go back and update the chapters that were already published. Don't worry, I'll continue the story.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------ This book was interesting and I liked it. It's a great book, so great work author! [img=recommend]

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The chapter is a little short, but don't worry, you're not alone.😂 Mine's shorter.