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omeroford4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วDo you mean heterochromia?
Sooner than I realized I was at the age of five, the time drew closer. I finally started to see my features. I have blonde hair like my mom but it's shaped like my father's, while I have my father's eye color I have my mother's eyes. Am like a combination of both. Well, I should be cause am their kid.- omeroford4mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Dude this is ridiculous.
In just a quarter of an hour, Lin Bai managed to scan through all the memories of Lin Xuanqing's entire life, crystal clear! - omeroford5mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Intimidating not intimating
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Cat not car
"Why do you ask? Could it be that you have a car or a fox? Actually, both are fine. I don't hate them." - omeroford6mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
How does he have access to the internet, that doesn’t make sense.
'Then, let's start with this one.' Choosing the potion that I wanted to go with, I ordered the ingredients on the internet. 'At least they are not that expensive.' I thought. - omeroford8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 5 The Accident and the Final Test
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My bad I didn’ see you already did it.t
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Can you make an aux chapter with that info and other information through the story.
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Asher????
Suddenly, the sound of footsteps echoed through the store, and Asher whirled around, his heart in his throat. A ragged-looking man stood in the doorway, his eyes gleaming with a savage hunger. - omeroford1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 41 First Match
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Do you have artwork or an image you have of the characters, if so can you put it on like an extra page so we can go back and look at it. I forgot how Issac and Warren look. Nice work on the novel.
"SAMUEL?!" - omeroford1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Author that doesn’t make sense. It would be better to say that because of the experience he gained so far he got better at dodging.
Lu Yuan heaved a sigh of relief. Luckily, he had practiced a movement art. - omeroford1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
What question, that dialogue is missing.
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What? This entire chapter needs to be refined. I love the story and appreciate the chapter but this is dfficult to understand at times.
Lu Ye changed his mind and realized that the other party was afraid that he was mistaken for him. The hand on the handle of the knife was loosened, and he said lightly: "I was killed." - omeroford1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Just throwing this out here but, it doesn’t make sense that Thale would approach the guy because you said that the trial takers are stronger. Maybe have the the guy he captures actually fight the creatures and come out victorious but weakened. Then have him be snatched by Thale.
One day, Thale sees an opportunity to capture one of the participants. A young man from the fourth sect, the venomous snake sect, becomes separated from the rest of his group and finds himself surrounded by a group of vicious beasts. Thale sees that the man is in trouble and decides to act. - omeroford1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Why is he at the coliseum in the first place? What about everyone else?
Awed by it's size he continued to stare. Four years had passed and most children had gotten used to their weapons of choice, as well as their abilities. They would have received their first metal weapons tomorrow, but Edwin suddenly found himself in front of the huge Colosseum.