RC1138
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RC113813 days agoCommentedin one chapter, it's hyuuga fuji then Uchiha Fuji. I guess MC gone to another fiction...
- RC11384 months agoCommented
Hello, in my opinion, sub-titles between paragraphs interrupt the flow of the story. I suggest to removal of them.
- RC11384 months agoCommented
Characters name is different than summary? Is it Nathan or Ethan?
- RC11388 months agoCommented
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- RC11389 months agoCommented
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- RC113810 months agoCommented
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- RC113810 months agoCommented
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- RC1138a year agoCommented
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- RC1138a year agoPosted
Good Story. it pulls you in. Thanks.....