XP_HAVOK

a powerful Ai in cyberpunk is almost a god as the cyber and physical world is so blurred if one had enough computational power it could just do whatever it wanted in the world or to almost any person. Even humanity in the cyberpunk universe are going the direction of turning themselves Into AI's with cyborgs and androids with the engrams. At this point Adam Smasher is more like a machine who thinks it's a human after basically replacing 99% of his body.

instead of always saying several rounds of something just say a barrage as that sounds better

unless the author changes the 8 inner gates cause after I think a certain gate the Chakra is to wild to control or mold its why it's so useful for might guy as he can't mold chakra

first time kill rewards for the different ranks would be nice. Also try to not make him a mirror copy of minato I've started to notice that he's getting all the abilities of him and if in the future he gets the teleporting ability he's just a Minato clone find something or a path that makes him different that can easily set them apart besides the kid potentially getting stronger then him in the story. Cause with the connection with jariya I could see him getting a contract with them and trying to learn their nature abilities and then he's basically a Minato template.

maybe awakening his space affinity would be enough from surviving that encounter and he has to work towards upgrading and training it. Another option is a massive increase in vitality I don't know if obito has the 1st cells yet but if they do just have the system take the blood from the claws and give him a little boost in his vitality and water and earth affinities. Also he might already have a space affinity with who his father is and his father knowing the washed down version of the teleporting technique if its who i think so his father probably has a few training methods for the affinity. Another interesting one would be a boost to his eyes visual abilities not giving him the bloodline but increases his ability to see farther, more dynamically and read people more as well as adjust to the light or dark quicker basically the boost an Uchiha kid gets when they first open the eyes. There is also a route that's a double sided sword give him an adjustable or one he can turn off and on dead heart seal like what madara put on obito.

so from my understanding it's like a common skill can go to an uncommon than a rare skill after but can only go one rank like Cara's totem skill.

Definitely chat gpt you can see the prompts used but also the way it's written it's so detached never first person and the story skips around multiple times to start introducing something then jumping ahead months or years constantly.

underground not yousui

I don't understand why he hasn't made a water jet jutsu yet just focus the water and with some pressure it could cut right through most things. that or coating his feet in water and surfing the land

could always have it were if someone does something incredibly stupid they could get crippled