LaterThatNight

as follow indian, i related this story, But I like adventure in astra more, as I more of a pervert. Anyway, this is free review, hope you successed.

Master

"My dear kitten"

Your webnovel is truly fantastic! The plot is engaging, and the characters feel so real. I’ve been hooked from the first chapter! If you have a moment, I’d love for you to check out my work too. I’m just starting out and would really appreciate your feedback. Thanks for sharing your talent

Review: "Bethi's journey in this story is nothing short of a captivating and heart-wrenching tale. As she lies on her deathbed, she is granted a unique opportunity to witness the life story of her childhood friend, Sejin. The revelation that unfolds before her eyes is as powerful as a thunderclap, as she comes face to face with the depth of Sejin's unrequited love for her. The weight of regret and guilt crashes upon Bethi like an avalanche, prompting a fervent desire to make amends. In a twist that defies logic, her wish is granted, and she finds herself transported back to her teenage years. This sets the stage for a second chance, a chance to express the love she had never acknowledged before. With trembling anticipation, Bethi embarks on a courageous journey to confront her own emotions. As the story unfolds, we are left wondering about the destiny that awaits Bethi and Sejin. Will their newfound chapter be filled with love and happiness, or will there be more secrets and challenges to face? The concept of going back in time and rewriting one's story is both intriguing and thrilling. The narrative beautifully captures the complexities of human emotions and the power of redemption. Bethi's transformation from a person plagued by regret to someone willing to seize the opportunity for love is both inspiring and moving. With each turn of the page, readers are swept away by a sense of anticipation, eagerly awaiting the secrets that will be revealed and the path that Bethi and Sejin will ultimately walk. Only time holds the answers to their intertwined destinies. In this poignant tale of love, regret, and second chances, the reader is left with a profound sense of hope and the belief that it's never too late to make things right. This story is a reminder of the power of love and the importance of seizing opportunities for forgiveness and redemption. Get ready to be swept away on an emotional journey that will leave you longing for your own second chance."

Short story like that not that famous but if it's get real novel length it going to be a good novel, keep it up. ~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~ ~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~ ~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~ ~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~^^~~

This was my first writing, please support me, I try my best, I know my English was weak that why I used translater that's why few sentences are not perfect, but I try my best. please support me.

It's my first Written, That's why I new in section, besides I am very weak in English that. But I continuously practice my writing. please support me in The Future as well, and please always tell me what I do wrong and what I need to work on. Thank you