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Week*

“Him”*

Definitely my favourite GOF fanfic. Very interesting character, and direction for the story.

Dame/damsel/darling and the demon might be better?

I though I picked up on a mistake lol.

Was Peter Parker working on the web fluid before the spider bite?

The story is both interesting and with enough humour to keep the story fresh. I wasn’t sure I would like this story as I’m a bit sick of system’s but I have really enjoyed the novel. The system is one that I haven’t really encountered before. I found the romance to be surprisingly good. Some small mistake with grammar but nothing too noticeable.

Hey, I was really bummed when I found out that you were going to drop the story. Seeing the new chapters brighten my day considerably. If you enjoy writing this story then ignore all the comments and just have fun with it. I truly hope you continue writing both this story and any other you might want to in the future.