I doubt she would be able to control him, when he can use his energy to nulify such things. There is a danger, true, since she can use him as a guinea pig, but that's why he needs to train even harder and gain some serious backing. There's only so long he can hide for, and in this situation, it seems more harmful to hide than not.

Nope. Close shave.

Not just this one. Contract for novel got cancelled, and from what i see, it doesn't show up under author's profile. Possible it got reported for pedo stuff, and cancelled.

Lol, this got cancelled by WN? And removed by author?.. no more contract.. i guess the underage stuff was too much? Or plagiarism?

Lol, this got cancelled by WN? And removed by author?.. no more contract.. i guess the underage stuff was too much? Or plagiarism?

... Sigh.. So boring...

This sounds kinda stupid. Goind on a suicide mission for puppy eyes? There's a time and place for every reaction, and some things should be taken seriously, unlike this dumb and whimpy way of thinking.

Well, keep going at your rhythm man, sometimes things just don't flow.

Poor Opal.. She got beaten up without either of them understanding what or how it happened... And he even went to finish the job...

Man.. will this part be over already? Such boring dragged out content.. been skimming and skipping.. Feels like author went into a slump while watching a documentary on rocks... nothing interesting to read about.

And yet Oliver still hides and doesn't try his best at anything, with the same dismissive attitude as always. Even trying to hold back at this moment, to not overtake his sister. His own improvement is a joke that depends on others, even when he got talent and strength that surpasses them all. He got his starting point, but doesn't use it.

Hmm.. So Beatrice is wounded.. but the most important question is, did she get R-worded? Cause if she did i will probably stop reading. And if she didn't, then it would be inconsistent with the situation. After all, this is human nature, especially for beautiful women.

Such a stupid buildup for a faceslap.. Dragged out to the limits for a moment of showing off.. how pathetic.

I dropped it myself. Got bored of it honestly.. It gets even more boring as it goes.

Hmm.. Yeah you could do that. Try to limit the nr of women he gets tho.. I can already smell a few more on the horizon. The ones he has right now are enough for this volume. Maybe when he returns home, he will be alone since his women are in a special "Ghost storage space" and Nyx comes out to play. They can have their own space at that point for a scene.

Well, i hope Nyx will eventually get her full scene as well. She seems a bit too good to not be given attention.

Ehh.. i would say to keep your job. Writing is unstable, man.. Today you're popular, tomorrow nothing. Be more cautious haha. Although, as a reader, i support you, i want more chaps for your novel. But i can tell you that it will not make it to the top, not until you correct your english and add more depth to it. Your future is your call, but don't rely too much on writing until you're experienced enough and get a stable reader base.

Well, don't make promises you can't keep. Better use the time to build a stash. 1 day missed and win win is lost. When you feel like writing, go for 3-4 chaps, and release 1-2 at a time. The goal should be the win-win until you gathered enough for higher privilege, along with the readers to be worth it. You can always edit the chaps based on feedback, but it's always better to have them stashed when possible.

Hmm i see. Well, it was still a bit of cheap play. Self harming to garner sympathy... That's not manly at all. Manipulating with self garm also, not manly at all. At least he'll get another 2 wives, albeit one is kinda broken. Hopefully, the tension eases in future chaps... though I am expecting to see all main chars crippled and losing limbs left and right during every fight with mobs.

Hmm what a drama without any depth. Such self-destructive behaviour, going against all his goals just for some self-satisfaction. If they crushed the jewel, his mother would die. Just because he feels guilty. Boo Hoo.. How pathetic. I really have a hard time feeling for the characters, especially MC who turns more pathetic by the day. "I tricked you for my goals, so you can cripple me, there you go" How dumb is that? There's no depth to it, and overly exagerated. Also, this adds to the self destructive attitude he has. Ending up almost crippled after every fight, harming himself to build an image that was not even needed, and now this. I don't know what's going through your mind and heart, Gris, but this kind of behaviour is childish and nihilistic. It doesn't garner sympathy or pity, but instead, makes one dislike and distance themselves from the chars.