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Wow, how convenient for a woman to show up
next, the story is cool but you literally seal an 11 tails in Boy and random hagoromo not even hamura got it like fuck a minato and kushina got it na makes sense
honestly and cool the story but push luminous and kinda boring it's obvious that she's forcing a romance there and kind of luminous's charisma comes from her being cold, apart from that the story is very good
honestly I've read a lot of work of this genre, the story itself is good, but it lacks in just one thing the cultivation of the protagonist It reaches a new level every 10 to 20 chapters and it's a sublevel which is boring to see the reason for not revealing the cultivation levels and cool since you can expand the work further but you should Reducing the frequency with which he levels up a little doesn't even have to be big one sublevel every 10 and a whole kingdom every 20 other than that the work is sensational
I'm all for that too
so...please put it as female i beg you
please don't stop writing ok
Honestly, when I started reading I didn't have much hope for obvious reasons, the abandonment of history and also because there are many FanFiction that only have a male protagonist. or just Shinigami’s perspective but then I saw that not only didn’t he abandon the story but also continued I’m really really happy I’m reading and rereading this and another one that has the Hollow perspective I really admire your work please continue the story.