Aug_ust15
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Author, the novel is really interesting, you're doing a really great job. But I think the area of concentration should be on the use of vocabulary and detailed explanation. A lot of words are used repeatedly and it gets a little confusing to understand how things came about. But apart from that, I would really love to continue this novel, it has really great potential and the characters are fascinating. Keep up the good work
ahh, you already know