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Classic_Joe8mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 42 Chapter 42: Resolve- Classic_Joe1yrแปะแล้ว
There are little to no mistakes as far as grammar and spelling go however that is the best thing about the story. The MC is childish, obnoxious, lazy and stupid. In six chapters nothing has happened except a below average reincarnation scene and the MC having to go to a library to figure out that he should maybe do a pushup to get stronger. The author claims it is AU, i like a well done AU, this is not a well done AU. Just changing dates and time but not outcomes.
- Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง Eliza993"It's either you or me you damn beast!. In the name of the great Founder! To the glory of the empire!"
- Classic_Joe2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I am gonna hope you mis-worded the authors note lol. Also know that this is your story so take all the time you need ( although hopefully not too much)to get it how you want it.
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง SCP_Sad_Cheerios
He did wing chun i think
"Little Yang if you plan to travel you need to be able to defend yourself without stabbing everybody, how would you like to learn Shaolin Kung Fu" - Classic_Joe2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
If I was him I would immediately go to Essos, want slaves with skills to implant in your altered slaves? Want to make a quick buck fighting your captain America level soldiers in an arena? Even if you just want loads of free corpses, Essos is the place to be.
Ch 10 Chapter 10 - Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง Crystal_Cat
" Their " is right here, as it is belonging to, " their obstacle course ", there is positional, like " The obstacle course over there "
Shikamaru hid behind a tree and wiped off the water running down his face. - Classic_Joe2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วEverything was good, the war would have been won. All of that changed when he appeared with his army of mass destruction. It was a terrifying experience, one that he didn't want to go through again. That was why he was one of the first to surrender and embrace their new emperor.
- Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง H_Alex
Like, three paragraphs higher.
"Ah, that's what Brandon told you? That was my confirmation name as a catholic, and what's Bobby?" she sounded confused. - Classic_Joe2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Probably for the best, even in just these twenty chapters you have figured out pacing of scenes more, looking forward to the rewrite.
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง Classic_JoeCh 394 394. The Great Conspiracy
- Classic_Joe2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 394 394. The Great Conspiracy
- Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง Renfavero
Where do you live? Afghanistan with the cheapest living cost in the whole world is €313 per month.
ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Classic_Joe2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วSeeing him leave, Shisui sadly muttered. "In the quest to have a real family, he ended up making everyone a family it seems."
- Classic_Joe2yrตอบกลับถึง Asura_VajraCh 37 Chapter 37: Schemes of Broken People