KaijuLover

well i can honestly say u did it pretty fantastically man

blud says this as if being around a really pretty woman doesn't make anyone nervous😭

broly is supposed to be a mega mutant if im not wrong vegeta had around a 1000 pl when he was born and he is already kind of freakshly strong for a saiyan

hating from the gate is crazy work😭

freaky ahh nga😭🙏🏻

overall it's great and has a ton of potential the only problem right now is the slow update speed but that can easily be solved, i have high hopes for this fan fic the author writes the story in a very fun and stable manner there is no unnecessary or unfun comedy or insane psychopathic behavior on the mc, aside from that actual hero stories are kinda rare nowadays, everyone just wants to be the "anti hero" or psychotic villain like mc who is morally dubious and doesn't take shit... which always ends up being a badly written cringefest, so this already puts it at high value for me, aside from that characters are well written not just the mc but the side ones too, i just hope author keeps up and doesn't drop it it's one of the few fics on this dogshit filled site i actually bother to come read as soon as it gets an update

buu does train he had a whole arc in super where he trained eventually turning into skinny buu and the fact buu is that strong without much training goes to show my point of his prodigious nature and also fighting is a kind of training it's just that most creatures don't have such a potential and biology that they can take full advantage of it like majin buu can

the ukelele apology

I hope you keep updating this you have good writing and execution and your ideas are really great, and you also manage to make character interactions feel good and not the total cringefest that is mostly expected in fanfics, you fic scratches most of the itches i have about a superhero fic so here is for a hopefully good future on your endeavors author✌️

4cm taller than me sadge😢