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Lilith_Zenon9hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAfter that he punched the trees, which also increased his strength and endurance. For the whole day, he either trained like this or went to catch fish and cooked them on the fire he created. He didn't use any equipment or his liquid metal and did everything with just his physical capability to increase his basic attributes.- Lilith_Zenon10hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
And here we see the MC trying his best not to wheeze.
"250000 from our sir over there, anybody wants to increase the bid, it's a super rare blueprint we are talking about, you might never get the chance to get another one." Robot spoke, encouraging others to bid. - Lilith_Zenon3dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Alright, but only a bit. She seemed petty enough to descend from wherever she resides and screw with people for any offense." Yin explained, hearing a silent scoff from Hajime.
- Lilith_Zenon7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 35 Uchiha Massacre Begins
- Lilith_Zenon7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"I don't touch children."
- Lilith_Zenon7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 19 Battle in Asgard
- Lilith_Zenon7dตอบกลับถึง Shay_Michaels
Iz gud storeh~. (It's a good story~.)
We have sent this to officially accept your offer of a world government under your leadership. This acceptance has come to us after much discussion and discourse over your leadership, skills, talents, skills, powers, governance and accomplishments. We are excited to work with you as the heads of 'states' and wish to meet with you in a month's time to figure out some of the rules we will operate under... There was some issues with certain segments of society but ultimately the world-wide referendum was above 70%, those that chose to vote. - Lilith_Zenon8dตอบกลับถึง HaremsHunter
And you need a body for it~.
"I'll make it so that you can have the memories of your time in the Reincarnation Centre, and I'll tell you about their location as well. Coupled with the unique skill Great Sage, that should be way more than enough for killing Issei, no?" - Lilith_Zenon10dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วA chapter ended in this universe but many chapters of Kai will continue in another universe as Naruto Uzumaki.
- Lilith_Zenon11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This part I disagree with. It was not the best way to have her die. Because it was a third party, a party which had already gone an extra mile and helped her I add, it felt forced and and "So mote it be!" kinda deal. The Angel's have zero reason for wanting her to awaken her powers, they are not invested into her. Instead, you should have went through your system in some way. It would have demanded more of you time, but I honestly, truly believe it would have fit your story much better.
I have not, nor will I EVER nerf Talia. This was something I always knew, and will never change. Her powers being weakened by nigh-Omnipotent deities was simply the best way I can have her "die" in order to unlock her hidden power. And that weakening is obviously not permanent, and has already been lifted, after her regeneration. - Lilith_Zenon11dตอบกลับถึง ArtoriaPendragon_
Because it was forced haha. You quite literally "Deus Ex Machinai" an event to get her to evolve. But rather, it was an "Angel" instead of "God." But the point stands. Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying your story, but you could have done that little bit so, SO much better. And it's slightly annoying, because I KNOW you can! You have the skills as a writer! It's not meant to disparage you, at least I don't want to, it's meant to just give you some constructive criticism.
A LOT of people got mad about her dying, and to them I ask "Do y'all have no patience whatsoever?" Like I don't want to be rude, but like have you never heard of something called "Story progression" and there's a thing called revealing more in the future, it happens a lot in fanfic. - Lilith_Zenon13dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
That means a lot of people are having an absolutely horrid day~.
Demiurge is having a nice day . He is walking toward the throne room . After entering inside the throne room . He met with albedo . - Lilith_Zenon13dตอบกลับถึง WhiteWizardIan
Prolly why the system is giving him a freebee and increasing his control~.
Reward : Free chakra control stats +20 , nine tail beast summoning and nine tail shape transformation . - Lilith_Zenon14dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Only 10???
{Reward: Level Up x 10!! Eternal Bragging Rights! ???} - Lilith_Zenon14dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Ahhh, sheeple. To be expected~.
Some people even misunderstood and exaggerated it and changed it to Damiyo's support. Now according to the people of Konoha, he is supported by the fire Damiyo. Now no one wants to mess with Naruto after this rumour and incident. - Lilith_Zenon14dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Maybe she can dodge swords now.... hmm, maybe we start with a wrench instead.
The user now has a sort of time and spatial related senses, allowing them to sense, see, move, etc, and more related to space and time. This allows the user to notice distortions in space and time, retain perception of local time flow, directly perceive the interstellar motions of cosmological bodies or their inhabitants including sensing the "shape" of the world to the extent that they were aware when trapped in pocket dimensions - Lilith_Zenon14dตอบกลับถึง Kenny123
Eh, more like plot killing all of her senses and instincts for... what ever is happening.
'...I died again, didn't I?' Talia softly thought, as she was within her own mental space. A sigh escaping her at the realization. - Lilith_Zenon15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I mean, you could simply resurrect her~.
Neia did not respond and went inside the house. She covered Manna's naked body with a white sheet and took the girl on her arms, then she went outside. Before coming, she had ordered one of the undead to open a grave some meters away from her house. Neia walked slowly to the grave and put Manna's body inside to rest forever. - Lilith_Zenon15dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Whaaaaaaaaat?"
- Lilith_Zenon20dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 20 Power Leveling