My god learn to use paragraphs

read until chapter 7 than the main characters name got switched to "Lin Yi" randomly.... His orginal name was Haotian. So, I understand it's still a Chinese name but how does it switch to a entirely different name. This lasts for two chapters and I stopped since if this happened now than it will probably be worse later. The novel is super fast paced and there is not any background given of why he wanted to "rebel" which is stupid since the Author could of made the novel 100x better if he/she just took like 30-40 chapters and expanded on the world background and the family the MC is currently from.

I tried reading this novel until chapter 15. But, the the chapters are WAY to short and the system states the summons are 100% loyal to the MC. However, the summons still don't approve the orders that is given to them. But they are forced to do it anyway because the system forces them. That concept is generally stupid not going to lie. The grammar is relatively good and I barely saw mistakes given there was barely any words on each chapter.

I hope he doesn't kill his mom since it seems like he cares about her so far

MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating.

Dropped, made Kratos into a ret*rded Chinse protagonist.

Is English your first language since there are tons of grammar mistakes in just this chapter alone.

Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.

I agree that will ruin this whole novel tbh.

I agree, I already have a feeling this novel will be ruined if the author adds shit from Chinese novels.

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Chinese wrote this I bet

is anyone elses chapter messed up. It's unreadable. it only shows "<br/> and there is no words besides that gibberish

did you mean 300 years to 550?

I honestly paid money after reading the first free 19 chapters and I honestly have to warn everyone else. Don't waste your money on this horrible novel. As stated in another review the author keeps repeating the MC's name and always says Dean mckenzie did this and that. Dean Mckenzie slayed the dragon. What a shit Chinese novel. The story is slow paced from what I can see so far which is a plus to me but might be a negative towards others. The MC is also horrible at naming things such as calling his skeleton "doggy 1 and 2." In the earlier chapters I believe around 6 or 7 he decided to call the skeleton "dean Mckenzie" which is the same name as himself. All in all if you read this don't expect much.

Does the grammar get any better in the later chapters of this novel?

if you are deciding to read this novel currently than I warn you now. The grammar is absolutely atrocious and I have seen some Chinese novels better than this.

Welcome back! I have been waiting for this to continue!

This got dropped?