His only goal is to find his father?

You did great start honestly nd everything so far is perfect ...thats where my request come....don't make him pathetic....like some dumb character who fall for random girl or suddenly thinking of family and all for no reason..atleast he should be most selfish till the end

So most of his action will be morally unquestionable??......like being a vampire and feeling bad about drinking blood isn't it kind of weird....shouldn't it be their basic instinct?

Like seriously mann???such a bland novel getting so famous-..............................................................................................................................................

Still....consequence of that can be quite horrible....a company like fb,insta,google would have silenced him to get program for themselves...if it was in real

sigh~why is every story start out great but regress slowly.....i really can't comprehend is brain get deviated or not able to process further......tbh noting special and mostly chirped off plotlines from others-

Isn't he a bit too open.....like how can a person suddenly become all so powerfull...

It's copied off another novel....just a bit of a difference in story-

I have a suggestion for ya if you didnt use it till now.....why don't he increase his talent.......won't it be better and reduce the points needed to cultivate waste talent?

I hope this gem will always usher in bright illuminating the light of many soulless spirits-(don't make him stupid even if he do mistake but not by the cause of affection)..........

Author grudge with his sis maybe^_^

That girl really ruined my mood.....would have been better if she had incurable disease or not for some damn reason fate connection-

Honestly .....around 70 chapters......it's best novel you can find around here but then again toxic romance and all-...........If he was so cold to everyone why did he even fall for some damn girl-_-...........anyways"I will stick with...Kill the Author one......he do not deviate his story too-

You are doing great so far.....but ig there something missing now.....please think of far ahead .......ur starting wisdom was great but i see its slowly erroding

Im really tired of these brainless authors..........is there a curse on them or something^_^

Umm.......Just like any other novel out there with an amazing headstart ....but slowly going towards it's doom...........not exactly an mc you would except......just a horny ignorant fella we have in here who thinks from his lower part-

3 authors i admire...our new one........,......real one.......,of madness apostle tho.. he left his novel on hiatus for a long time..(betrayal)...

That brought back old memories 🤧🤣

.....For god sake mann!!!!.....when tfff did demon become so kind?? ...............does the word demon means "kind compassionate soul".......😭🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Tch...I'm kinda disappointed .. everything was going well like he was logical and all but suddenly how he is behaving like that...is there a disorder that makes every author being protective of female character 🥲🤌...anyways so far it was actually amazing