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Suzune_Simp6mthตอบกลับถึง Beast_Mode_7653It may not be free, but the free rewards are better than when doing the tasks at the site. You can get at least 3 fast passes on a phone in under a minute. Whereas, you only get some points on the site.
With that, Long Tian headed toward the seating area, his confidence soaring as he anticipated the possibility of awakening a remarkable martial spirit—perhaps a super dragon or even a dual martial spirit...- Suzune_Simp6mthตอบกลับถึง puremichigan
bro, you have no right to be disappointed in him. At least he fell in love with a real girl in his reality. They even "got together." While you.. falling in love with 2d girls, and your right hand being the closest thing to a girlfriend you will ever have. What could be more disappointing than that?
Ye Chen was quite nervous; since he started dating Liu Qian, they hadn't spent much time together, and even they had never been out alone together. - Suzune_Simp9mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The bra was provbably exotic or something for him not to recognise what it was
'How did Big Bai get his hands on Beauty Su's bra?'detailContracted The Beautiful Triplets And I Gained The 10000x Rebate Systemแอคชั่น · Powerpuff Girl - Suzune_Simp1yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
lmao
He had unintentionally become a weirdo. - Suzune_Simp1yrตอบกลับถึง Luiz_H
- Suzune_Simp1yrตอบกลับถึง DEATHS_SHADOW07
- Suzune_Simp2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Her! her! the grammar u till now isn't bad at all but is it really that hard to learn how to address which gender? that it's even harder than writing a novel in english itself? It's all your fault! now my image of her is a red haired manly woman who is also an excellent blacksmith with her outstanding fire techniques 😭
Elder Feng smiled. His gaze swept across everyone present and finally landed on Qi Ming. The smile on his face became even wider. Clearly, he was quite satisfied with Qi Ming's performance. "Very good." - Suzune_Simp2yrตอบกลับถึง Elyon
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uhmm.. couldn't it just be an upgraded version? like his second order blood manipulation evolved from the first order? as far as I know the name didn't change. Or is a skill's name supposed to change on the third order? further more there's no mention, if that third order skill's capability is only equal to his first order so I am really confused how this entire conversation is even possible.
Lilith took a deep breath and nodded: "That skill... I'm referring to Shadow Blink. That skill, I saw it before.... But the strange thing is that the human who used it back then said his skill was Third Order!" - Suzune_Simp2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
uhmm.. couldn't it just be an upgraded version? like his second order blood manipulation evolved from the first order? as far as I know the name didn't change. Or is a skill's name supposed to change on the third order? further more there's no mention, if that third order skill's capability is only equal to his first order so I am really confused how this entire conversation is even possible.
Lilith took a deep breath and nodded: "That skill... I'm referring to Shadow Blink. That skill, I saw it before.... But the strange thing is that the human who used it back then said his skill was Third Order!" - Suzune_Simp2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I do not understand the cause of her anger? it seems way too forced and out of character
"You!" Alex clenched her fists and glared at him. - Suzune_Simp2yrตอบกลับถึง Red_dragon
you guys are disgusting
"Uhh… you can let me down now," she said with a little flushed face. - Suzune_Simp2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
author there is a video about "how to show not tell" on YouTube. I suggest you watch that, it would elevate your writing to another level
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sigh..
Steven Roger frowned upon hearing those words. Before he could speak, the Nemesis Order's Leader had already opened his mouth and added, "No problem. We will stay here and protect you." - Suzune_Simp2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
another poor guy😔
The Nemesis Order's leader immediately blushed when he noticed that wink. He never thought that an Angel would wink at him. - Suzune_Simp2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
truly.. poor guy..
As soon as Steven Roger spoke those words, the angels felt that the Pope's words were right, and their eyes flickered with killing intent.