TyrantRex27

What kinda of dumb novel is this the mc behaves like he has a case of main character syndrome but he is a dumbfuck. The novel story was somewhat good inspite of the cliche mysterious organisation trope, but the author had to write a chapter where the mc’s parents stole money from him but the mc didn’t do anything, didn’t even take the money back but was instead shamed and was taken away by the police. What type of dumb story is this since when can normal people have the right to same supernatural person even if he is of the lowest rank he can still make more money it that month than they could ever make but you make them seem such low class that even beggars can look down on them. The story was kinda of ok in the first like 20 chapters but immediately he went back home it became a 1 star not recommended it’s a bad novel

Author just curious but do the other races keep humans as slaves

I hate this gimmick

this has already become stupid, jow can the mc not discover the spy when he used his ss rank skills that's impossible, the syrory has just downgraded from a 3.5 star tor a 2 star because it shows that the author needs forced plot to make a good story

I read to chapter 82. in my opinion I would have really enjoyed reading this novel if it's basic framework would have been built better, it had been a lot more polished and they substituted the system for an actually powerful growth type talent. one of the biggest of of the novel is the system, its too broken spoilers but it makes Training his army completely irrelevant instead they all basically use an experience system because of that they got strong too fast but for some reason always struggle when fighting weaker enemies because they is a limit to how much a mob enemy can be strengthen before you trash the novel for making no sense so instead they give stupid reasons why the mc army is losing for convenience to actually have a fight scenes instead of a slaughter. the finally reason the novel isn't as good I wanted it to be is because of the mc, you would want to like him but it's hard, he is very stupid. I believe if the author removed the system and gave the mc a talent that can do what the system can do but as an actual talent and make it alot more natural making the training time in months and years, make the mc system support and help the designated people training faster and assist it breakthrough, give support while training combat techniques and ideas of new evolution methods for their pet beast but needing to get the materials themselves it would have been a whole lot better

your excuse makes no sense, if she were a gold rank I would understand but she is a diamond rank. what it feels like to me is that since his people get stronger without actually working for it the rank isn't even important there are just names without any weight or combat power

author if your excuse was that the archer was an agility based warrior thats why she was having a hard time against bronze and silver warriors explain why his diamond rank knight with diamond rank weopen and sacred rank sword is even getting injured in the fight it makes no sense it feels forced like you wanted to write some cool fight scenes of the mc but it's coming off mediocre

his talent has zero growth potential

why I am sure this is the same guy that had your iron Ore and was planning with mercenaries to take over your land or I am mistaken

why didn't he use Gluttony on th rest of the wolves