It is not a sin for people to have selfish desires... It is incompetence that is the original sin
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Hmm... fox would appear after 50 chapters, we have a Lynx (hot and cold) right now in just next few chapters, there is also a Qilin but her transformation to humanoid form would take time.
She is older than everyone here, thrice as old as Bai Yujian.
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An engaging start with a promising underdog protagonist 💫. The world-building is unique 🌍, and the story keeps you hooked 🔥. Worth checking out! 📖
Terror in resonance reference? Sphinx?
In this version, things I kept as more simple,Ning Gufan was the formation master, and transferred its knowledge, all his immortal cultivation scrolls were stolen by Evil Express. Also in this version, Ning Gufan was actually personification of "Author", sent by him, to aid Su Xiaobai fix the story, it's signify revival of story, like previous story was abdonened and new one was created, the goal is to be likable Villain and not be discarded this time. As per the original story, the ring world, was supposed to be a cauldron ring, and he was a dual cultivator, even if he passed that technique to Su Xiaobai, it wouldn't work for him, due to Yin specific veins, MC have no ability for "Yang", so he can pluck Cultivation on women, dry them turn them into corpse, but can't dual cultivate with them in traditional sense of "Yin" and "Yang." normally a man have "Yang" nature and a female have "Yin", that's how dual cultivaton works, but in MC case, he has "Yin" and female too "Yin", it's like two magnets facing same face put together, they would repeal each other if tried dual cultivation in traditional meaning.
We would explore more about Lore of Tianlong Spirit Stone, as White Cloud Star in separate arc within story, when he goes back for revenge. As White Cloud Star have secrets of his own, why only that planet is infested with hunters, etc... It's mostly because it's like a "farm", a experiment by a greater being. I have to add couple of auxiliary chapters more, like one for Geography, would see if I can insert some about basics of cultivation and this world, so it's easier for rest to understand these things as well, although it's all revealed in story at some point, it's clustered and not everyone would be able to connect the dots.