Lazy_Runner
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Lazy_Runner2yrตอบกลับถึง WM_DizyCh 17 CHAPTER 17 - MIRACLE STORE- Lazy_Runner2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
PLEASE COMMENT HERE WHAT THE NAME OF THE STORE SHOULD BE. FORGOT TO DO THIS AFTER I POSTED THE CHAPTER
"Uhh..... how about [REDACTED]?" - Lazy_Runner2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
here it is friends
In instants, a 7'4, highly-muscled old man stood in the place where Noire once was. (Pic here) - Lazy_Runner3yrแปะแล้ว
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- Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง Bored_Acolyte
if he were to go to a cultivation world, which one would you recommend?
[A/N: COMMENT HERE WHAT WORLD THE MC SHOULD VISIT NEXT. THE MOST LIKED COMMENT WILL WIN. AS ALWAYS, THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT.] - Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง Rebel_Royal5
I like that a lot! i'll wait a couple of days until i start writing the next chapter so that more people have time to comment their worlds (or universes) of choice. if more people want those you cited, then that's the one it'll be. If it isn't, it just means that the MC won't go to them now but in the future.
Ch 15 CHAPTER 15 - ACTING MORE LIKE GOD - Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง Lord_tabsCh 12 CHAPTER 12 - GETTING A PET
- Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง Rebel_Royal5Ch 15 CHAPTER 15 - ACTING MORE LIKE GOD
- Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง Eternal_Sag3Ch 12 CHAPTER 12 - GETTING A PET
- Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง N0_Hope
Are you perhaps brain dead? Offend is a common word in the English dictionary. If you find it weird because it's used a lot in cultivation novels, then it's your fucking problem. I won't stop using a word just because you don't like it.
"Cthulhu!" A loud, demanding voice spoke out of nowhere. "Stop this nonsense! Do you have any idea of who you were about to offend?! You fool! Go back to your slumber before I become furious!" - Lazy_Runner3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วIn front of him was a gigantic 180 meters tall and 490 meters long beast. With the body and horns of a deer, the head of a dragon, the tail of an ox, and the hooves of a horse, this massive creature stared at Jonah with curious, void black eyes. Some parts of the beast's body, such as the hooves, end of the tail, and the top of the horns, were covered in a beautiful blue fire, which added a lot to its imposing appearance. (look here to see the beast)
- Lazy_Runner3yrตอบกลับถึง Dragon_above_allตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว
- Lazy_Runner3yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Before I start, I should say that I'm enjoying your book a lot, so keep on writing and best of luck. Now what I wanted to say is, instead of making a dialogue like this: Leo: No, have you Harry? Make one like this: "No, have you Harry?" Leo asked. You could even add something like "Leo asked with a smile", etc. This is just my opinion though, so feel free to disregard it. Anyway, wishing you the best!
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