kyzah

The beginning is awful, you can tell the author wasnt taking it seriously. Does get better tho. My main problem is the main cast is so annoying and insufferable. So insufferable in fact I had to write a review just to talk about how annoying they are. Liam, Lily,kevin and whoever especially that love interest from the gem stone order, I hate them so much. I honestly wish the mc just kills them all. The reason I gave this novel a 6 is because some parts of this novel are really cool. For example Your sarcastic and joking way of speaking... at first, I thought it was just because you were a dumbass." "But... you're just a psycho. You talk sarcastically because you don't see the people you're talking to as real people... just things to pass the time." "You can't talk seriously or discuss earnestly because you don't seriously see the people around you as humans." Looking at my head, which was outside the window, Liam continued. "Even now, as I'm speaking to you, you continued staring out the window, ignoring everything I said. A normal person would react in some way, whether it's getting angry or sad... but you just don't listen." "It's like... like I'm not even a person in your eyes. Just an object that you can use and take from."

Im going to give this novel a 5 because I do think it deserves it so read it if your hesitating. I was initially put of because reading about descendants of ancient gods didnt really appeal to me but this is actually really good, In all honesty the best thing the author did about this novel is the characters. I like the mc personality and his amazing planning. I also love his brother but im so upset hes not had enough screentime, and hes been hyped up so much by the author so im looking forward to him doing something crazy if someone hurts Neo, and then everyone realising Neos background is amazing. We were also so close to seeing Elizabeth ( my fav ) about to do something with Neo until ahem. Im on about chapter 100, so some of the flaws I would say are him overlooking his "past self" warnings. This just feels so idiotic and flawed imo, if I was in his position I would absolutely take it into consideration. Also sending the students into such a dangerous gate is also pretty reckless, like most of the god clans peak descendants will most probably perish. Does the principal not understand this? What about the backlash? Mcs brothers going to end up destroying the continent lol. In my opinion I will give this a 4.75, I absolutely reccomend reading

If you are hesitating on whether to read this then just do it. In the current dungeon arc there are times where I have to stop reading and process the peak fiction. In all honesty even if something is rated highly on webnovel most of the time its still pretty trash but this story is just so well written that I had to make a review. I love Jasmine especially my fav,