Writers_Ablood

As someone who's been on this website for a long time, specifically as an avid fanfic reader, I can confidently say this story is very very intriguing. I will explain in detail. But for now, the overall sentiment: It's great and a somewhat unique twist on the typical HP fanfics. I'd definitely recommend people read it. Now let's dive into the details. Starting off with the writing quality. I am not the best judge, and probably slightly biased. However, if I do compare it to the others I've read on this site, the writing quality is good. It's descriptive, sensible and invokes a detailed scene. Though sometimes it can feel overpowering, but that's not really anything you'd worry about as a reader. Perhaps, just for the author's reference, sometimes it's best to tone it down so the chapters are more digestible. Regardless, 5 Stars, through and through. I am not one to speak on "Stability of Updates". I already have a horrible track record of that. However, it's not that bad. The author is probably busy, and seeing as its their first book, it probably takes some time getting used to the update schedule. For now, 5 Stars, I don't see why the rating should suffer. Story Development. An interesting twist on the classic HP fanfic, though nothing too wild or off beat. Harry does have female twin in this story, and hence the number of POV's that matter are increased. If you're not into that, its understandable. MC is the grandson of Grindelwald, that's well established. The story is a great attempt at creating tension in Hogwarts through "indirect politics", but not the unsavoury kind. Only 10 chapters in, so I cannot claim that its perfect. But it is intriguing. Character design. The author has done well in crafting their own MC (Lucian). He has a great personality and always seems to know more than he lets on. He is calm, collected and primarily someone that doesn't share much. Not to say that he's not sociable. That's a separate matter. He's quite the enigma, the best way to describe is someone who's probably matured faster than he needed to. He's well versed in what goes on behind the scenes. Nevertheless, that doesn't take away from his inquisitive thoughts, and it seems like there's always a plan. World Background, well the world background isn't something surprising. Typical Hogwarts story. Perhaps in the future we'll get to see France or some other magical country. The story starts off near Diagon Alley, so don't expect it to change course. Look's like the story will spend the first arc or two in the castle. Overall, interesting story. I am happy that its not harem. I hope the author continues writing and uploading. Definitely a story to keep your eye on. I'd also recommend that the author should leave his own review, explaining his perspective on the story and what his circumstances are. It'll help connect with the readers more.

Nice chap

Damn, I might be hooked.

I like where you are taking the story.

I like interesting harry potter fanfics. I am definitely interested in yours. keep up the good work.

Finally, I am early for a chapter.

I don't often read harem or R18 novels. But, this particular story has potential. It combines gory action with cohesive world building to deliver a truly thrilling narrative! Definitely one to remember.

Best of luck writing! Glad to have you back.

Pretty good imo.