Sorry I got you into Destiny like that.....Forgive me. Hope you enjoy the fic tho!

Appreciate the comments, leave a review if you like the story!

Man I got projects all of June and finals in July. I really wanna try TFS.....no time.

Are you guys stalking this fic or smth. How are you here?

I didn't really, but I got too busy with the other one.

Certainly, though for now I'm quite busy. I am definitely trying to find time to upload.

Hmm tbh, I usually do 2-3 times a week, but 4th year hitting me hard rn. I'm managing 7 projects all due in 2nd week of June. Which means I don't have much time rn. But when I do, (I will tell u all in Author Notes), expect 2-3 times a week, or more if time permits.

Naruhodo!

As for some details you've pointed out, I actually haven't changed them. I think in the previous version, MC does see Traveler from the Cosmodrome. But to be honest, it's not exactly seeing Traveler but just the white hue of it. The primary changes were from 1st pov to 3rd pov and ofc slightly improved descriptions.

The Mad Rogue reading my series....hmm Interesting.

Thank you for the analysis, yes I had to sit through my own cringe to kinda update it a bit. It does seem AI (ish) because the dialogue as compared to the recent chapters is very rigid. I haven't changed that. There's still somethings I've got to refine, but the chapter is about 3k words and its quite difficult to get write. I am slowly rewriting the first 7, and then probably going back to updates.

But what do I get in return?...... Ok, I was busy doing some rewrites for the first few chapters because they were horrendous. Kinda busy with that. I'll cook up the new chap soon. But I got tests in June so I'm kinda busy.

The story itself has a great and interesting premise, though there's not a lot of chapters out right now, we can expect some great things in the future. I'd say the only thing that irks me is the pacing. If the story moves just a tad bit slower and everything is well explained and foreshadowed, it'd be a richer experience. Grammar wise, it's quite solid, though there's some typo's here and there. I'd say the author is doing a great job, because while reading the story I could definitely see the complexity of the world background. The fight scenes in the beginning also had many elements, but overall I do think it could use some gravitas. Good work though! Hope you continue writing.

Pov: Kabr when he realized that actions have consequences.

I mean, unless you don't have to survive? Boy's kinda immortal innit.

Man I feel you. I played D1 on a borrowed disk from a friend, cuz he didn't like the game at all. An insane adventure from start to finish.

I aim to please my good sir!

Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened.

Thanks for reading the book, hope everything's going good for you.