Joe_Phillips_4641

I absolutely love how you slipped the crane (stork) carrying a jar of pickles into this. For us old timers, that really is a fond memory. Thank you 😊

The costume idea I would have for him from "Blade". Especially the sword (for him, 2 of course).

Is the last part of this from another book?

Pricilla

This!! It happened to me with two of my X's. Geesh! I can't even get away from it in a book. 😂🤣😂

I have found, that after reading to this point, I have a personal connection with the MC. I served my country in it's Army for 24 years. I traveled around the world several times I saw things that normal person's should NEVER see. I did things that soldiers are trained to do. I too bear these scars. The authors insight into the mind of a damaged psychy is emence. Very well done. In reading thus far, I have faced some of my own daemons. Thank you.

The irony in this. Man tempting the snake to eat the apple. I love it!

You're missing his ring of teleportation with 5 uses.

Throughout this chapter, "Jean" has been referred to as "Edward"?

For this paragraph and the next, I absolutely LOVE the shout out to one of my all time favorite movies of the Martial Arts world from the late 80's. At least he's not flexing and screaming. lol